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5 days since anything passed these painted lips,
Besides water and one cracker,
About 32 calories and even then it wasn‘t nice,
Closer than ever before- I can almost see my hips.

They joked again, said they’ll take me to the GP,
I had one apple, I think that’s 52 calories,
I know them all by heart now, 78 in half that low fat muffin that I didn’t eat,
They can joke all they like but they’ll never get me.

Third ribs showing, down to a 32B,
I think they’ve caught on now, can’t tell though,
They offer to share food but, I don’t want it. Let them be fat,
I’m not letting them do the same to me.

Drank so much today it actually hurts,
About two and a half litres in the space of 2 hours,
I think they’re suspicious I skived PE again,
But they‘ll only threaten, they can’t do much worse.

84 pounds now, six stone, BMI 15.4,
My size 6 clothes are falling off me,
I've got no tits and I could balance a tea tray on my collar bones,
but I just need to be skinny, that little bit more.

79 pounds and I think I'm almost dead,
hit my hand on a desk and two of my fingers broke,
haven't had a period in months, not that it bothers me much,
could break my neck if I fall out of bed.

77 pounds, needle in my arm on a drip,
collapsed on the field and nearly died of heart failure,
paramedics realised, one way ticket to eating disorders ward,
Now everyone knows i'm in Anas grip.

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That was amazing.

Really vivid in a way.
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Amazing.

Couldn't fault it.
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Thanks Jess + Beth.



Bugger. I always mix up Jo with Jess.
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Moved.

I loved it.
I might comment more when I'm not on my phone.
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wow. I didn't expect that at all, especially not within about half an hour of posting it. Thanks erin (:
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i liked it.
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nice one man good and vivid, just soem constructive criticism i dnt think the inner detail for instance the amount of cclaories realy worked but thats just my opinion it sorta makes the poem different. good job though
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^I actually liked that part...
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I'm pretty sure those were the right calorie measurements. Bit sad I can remember them.
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wow i think it was amazing and really gets the point that if you get too thin you no longer look pretty x good job x
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omg that is so...good. my friend had anorexia this year...she just got out of treatment 3 weeks ago...it's so hard to know what's really going on in her head. that...sort of cleared it up :T but it's good smile.gif
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That was amazing. Really detailed, which made it better.
I loved it.
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I liked it. Well written.
but I also found it a little hurtful..I'm not sure why :/
I guess it's just because you put being thin in a very negative light when some girls can't help being that skinny.
anyways though, it was good smile.gif
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My stomach turned into a big knot now. It was one of the most frightening and most vividly told poems I have read.
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that was seriously the best poem i have ever read.
i mean like, i am anorexic for the most part and now i see what can happen, or what will happen.
it was just so well written, i just.. im speechless lol
i loved it. there, basically all i can say.
ur awesome at this, keep it up!!
xoxo-Becka happy.gif
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wow very moving. it makes me wonder.
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Your a really good writer, you got the feeling just right, like the steady downfall of losing weight.


Groovy gravy (:


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this is extremely vivid.. my aunt has anorexia and i imagine this is what runs through her mind, but idk... still wonderful work and i wanna see more.. smile.gif lol
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I like this.
There's just something all too familiar about it.

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