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" It's Not Just A Party, It's A Funeral "


They will find my corpse on the shower floor.
And with my bleeding wrists will be a note that explains all of this.

"Dear friends and family, I hope that you can understand."

I could not handle the fear and regret, knowing I ruined my only chance.
A lesson in carelessness. Let my grave stand as proof.
You've only got one chance, so take advantage.
I will burn in hell for my selfishness.
I will burn in hell.
But you'll see me reach for angel wings.
You've only got one chance, so take advantage.
I know the backlash. Call me a coward all you want.
I know the truth is that I am free.
I am free!


The Day The Earth Shook

If only you knew
how much this hurts me.
A loved one dies
As I stand by
And witness the horror.
Unable to prevent the inevitable.
I watch the light flicker out.
Guilt comes in waves.
This is unbearable.
Wir sind eins in das selben.
Can you not see it?
Du sind nicht das nur eins.
Worry becomes a plague.
I feel my foundation shake.
A pindrop caused an earthquake.



A Mother passing by her son's bedroom was astonished to see that his bed was nicely made and everything was picked up.

Then she saw an envelope, propped up prominently on the pillow that was addressed to "Mom" With the worst premonition she opened the envelope with trembling hands and read the letter.


Dear Mom,:

It is with great regret and sorrow that I'm writing you. I had to elope with my new girlfriend because I wanted to avoid a scene with Dad and you. I have been finding real passion with Stacy and she is so nice. But I knew you would not approve of her because of all her piercings, tattoos, tight motorcycle clothes and the fact that she is much older than I am. But it's not only the passion...Mom she's pregnant. Stacy said that we will be very happy. She owns a trailer in the woods and has a stack of firewood for the whole winter. We share a dream of having many more children.

Stacy has opened my eyes to the fact that marijuana doesn't really hurt anyone.We'll be growing it for ourselves and trading it with the other people that live nearby for cocaine and ecstasy. In the meantime we will pray that science will find a cure for AIDS so Stacy can get better. She deserves it. Don't worry Mom. I'm 15 and I know how to take care of myself. Someday I'm sure that we will be back to visit so that you can get to know your grandchildren.

Love,
Your Son Jon


P.S. Mom, none of the above is true. I'm over at Tommy's house. I just wanted to remind you that there are worse things in life than the report card that's in my center desk drawer.

I love you.
Call me when it's safe to come home.



?FANTASY?

You caress my hips,
as you gently kiss my lips.
You finger tips lightly slide across my face,
making me want this sweet embrace.
My heart starts pounding deep inside my chest,
this feeling that you give me is the best.
Feeling you look deep inside my soul,
a part of me suddenly becomes whole.
Abruptly you push my arms back above my head,
knowing nothing has to be said.
You slightly bend down to bite my neck,
Thinking to myself this has an intense effect.
My heart beat starts racing,
our hands tightly lacing.
I see the look in your eyes,
and inside...my heart silently cries.
I want this so bad.
And it's hard to resist,
maybe it's your seducing kiss.
Everything starts to disappear,
making this desire become so clear.
As you slowly take off my shirt,
I knew that this was more than a flirt.

My body begins to shake,
this sensational feeling I couldn't fake.
You slowly unbutton my pants,
taking them off with your desiring hands.
you picked me up caressing me tightly,
feeling you breathe on my neck just slightly.
Then you lied my body on your bed,
only thoughts of you roaming through my head.
Kissing me harder than ever,
my body getting a little wetter.


You start kissing me at my neck,
then end at my thighs,
my mouth lets out blissful sighs.
Then you take off my bra,
And for this passion I start to fall.
You finally tear off what?s keeping us apart,
I?m now moaning to the beats of my heart.
You start out real slow,
Then you get down real deep,
This feeling of passion I couldn't keep.
It feels so good,
This I guess you understood.
Cause the more I screamed,
The more you gave to me.
My nails scratch intensely down your back,
controlling myself is something I lack.
You started to slow down,
sensational bliss is what I have found.
A smile came upon my lips,
you graciously kissed my lips.
You completely stopped and layer down by my side,
My serenity I couldn't hide.


Inner Demon

Go deep into your body, and pull out your heart,
The demon form your soul must depart.
{Chorus}x2 That demon is (you)x7. That demon is (you)x7. That demon is y-oooouuuu!
You make a bet with the reaper,
Put up your soul to keep her.
When all you need is attention,
But you are forgetting.
{Chorus}x2 That demon is (you)x7. That demon is (you)x7. That demon is y-oooouuuu!
You cut your arms and scratch your face,
Turn to the world your a big disgrace.
So now your stuck between this gap,
Go around life to complet this lap.
You made the wrong turn,
now you go and burn.
{Chorus}x2 That demon is (you)x7. That demon is (you)x7. That demon is y-oooouuuu!


"Silence Of A Heartbreak"


You broke my heart a thousand times.
Thinking of you only makes me cry.

Everyday I wonder why... you couldn't ever tell the truth,
and why you always hurt me.

You never even said good-bye,
just turned around and walked away.

Without a word to possibly say,
you just pretended everything was ok.

Still thinking of you constantly drives me insane,
because you left me in a lot of pain.

The heart can only take so much...
eventually it will turn to dust.

You know you see the pain in my eyes,
but all you are is a bunch of lies.

The pain that now rolls down my face,
now feels like a major discrace.

Cause all you were was a big mistake,
one that I could never fake,
on how bad these tears feel now.

Because I let you break my heart,
and always tear it apart.

Feeling like you've completely abandoned me,
and all this time I couldn't see,
that this misfortune was a joke on me.


"Drifted"



As the time passes by,
I lust wonder why,
My world feels like it's shattered, all destroyed and battered.

I want to pick up the pieces,
but I just sit and watch them fall.

I just don't have the strength to stand up straight and tall.

As my tears of fear roll down my face,
make me feel like I have no place.

But as my life keeps falling apart,
I feel a pain go through my heart.

Life is not a game I play,
Cause one wrong move and I could quickly drift away.

Into the ocean of a broken world,
thinking of how painful this life can be.

Because I just want to be free,
of people telling me who to be,
and not live the life they put out for me.

But these tears are never ending,
Cause I'm sick of pretending.

So I'm holding this blade in my hands,
hoping it will take me somewhere else.

Sitting by my bed,
I slowly lean back my head.

Holding this blade to my wrist,
is something that I'm willing to risk.

Sliding it across my scarred skin,
only feeling the pain within.

As the blade makes it's way deeper in my skin,
I know that my heartache is about to end.

My eyes that now cry more and more,
quietly watch the blood hit the floor.

Now not beeing able to feel a thing,
I know it's the end of my suffering.



"Bleeding"



Suicide constantly going through my head.
Always wondering about the life of the dead.
Not being able to deal with this insane life.

It brings me to this decieving knife.
Slit my wrists so deep...
the blood it could not keep.

It felt so good.
In a sense that I knew it would.
Letting out a lot of pain,

only doing this to keep me sane.
Blood falling to the ground,
dripping down without a sound.

The puddle of my blood is getting so big,
that it's surrounding my fragile body....
And my thoughts within.

Because I know I'm getting closer to the end,
another moment I could not spend,
In this world that drives me insane.

While it causes this much pain,
as I just sit and stare.
At the world with just a glare.

My eyes...Start to get heavier.
Cuz... I'm drifting..further and further away
Because...I know I cannot stay.



"Break"



My heart is weak,
to the point where I cannot speak.

The pain flowing like a river,
is now causing me to constantly quiver.

My eyes are burning,
from this pain that's never ending.

Agony to my heart is all your ever sending.

Crying is all I ever do,
Because I'm so in love with you.

I feel like I'm falling apart.
All shattered and torn like my heart.

You have a part of me that I can't get back,
knowing that I'm about to crack.

Breaking down, not being able to stand up,
is slowly headed my way.

Not being able to take the pain,
I just sit and stare hopelessly in the rain.

And just wait for whatever,
thinking about how I promised you forever.

Letting go of everything inside,
Is making me want to constantly hide.

Hide the person that I am,
hoping someone will understand.

Why I keep reaching for a hand.

For someone to help me stand and be strong,
because I know this is very wrong.

But.... I just let go,
making me fall.


"Silenced Pain"


My eyes keep crying,
as my pain is dying.

From being so numb.

The feelings that are so deplore,
cause me to hit the floor.

My feelings of emptiness is getting stronger,
not knowing if I can take this any longer.

The feelings that are causing me to break,
makes me just want to fake....

Who I really am
so that no one will know that it's all just a scam.

The invisible blood that rolls down my skin,
is making me live a complete sin.

My eyes they burn from the agony I feel.
Makes me wonder if what we had was real.

As I cry all my heartache away,
and relive the pain everyday.

I'm still holding on,
because I don't know if this love is gone.

Because I love you to death,
until my very last breath.

But the day has come,
that I realize that this is dumb.

And I have to move on,
because our love is already gone.




"Betrayel"



The tears that roll down my face,
now fall at a faster pace.

My heart broken once again,
makes me feel very sullen.

With betrayel by my side,
your lies you tried to hide.

I gave you my trust,
but all this was to you was lust.

Sometimes I think of how futile love really is,
but love is something you'll always miss.

No matter how much you get hurt,
and pushed in the dirt.

My eyes are filling up an ocean full of tears,
you'd think I'd get it after all these years.

That love is just a disillusion waiting to happen.

My trust for people is now lost,
because another heartache is what it will cost.

I falter to even confront how I feel,
'Cause it's just reminding me that these feelings are real.

I don't have the vitality to deal with it,
My tortureous mind I wish it would quit.




"Soul Mate"



You create a sense of happiness inside my heart
something that's been torn apart

But amazingly you found a way
for this rapture to stay

You healed the loniness it felt
Cause when I think of you my heart just melts

It's the things that you say
that truly take my breath away

Some days I wish I could hold you close
Because your vision is what I miss the most

It's not about the physical
Cause just having you in my life is a miracle

Your spirit is what makes me weak
As I lose my breath to speak

It's your eyes that see it all
And for you I passionatly fall

In love all over again.....
And the rest of my life I want to spend

With you in my loving arms
to keep you away from any harm

I have come to realize this is my fate
That you are most definetly my one true soul mate



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w0w, i like them all, nice poems...=]

to0 hard 2 pick a fav cuz theyre all gud...
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QUOTE (Xx l0ne.s0ul xX @ Feb 24 2008, 06:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
w0w, i like them all, nice poems...=]

to0 hard 2 pick a fav cuz theyre all gud...



Why thank you.. I'm not sure about them.. but thx ^.^
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QUOTE (Lynn @ Feb 25 2008, 08:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
what do you think?







A Mother passing by her son's bedroom was astonished to see that his bed was nicely made and everything was picked up.

Then she saw an envelope, propped up prominently on the pillow that was addressed to "Mom" With the worst premonition she opened the envelope with trembling hands and read the letter.


Dear Mom,:

It is with great regret and sorrow that I'm writing you. I had to elope with my new girlfriend because I wanted to avoid a scene with Dad and you. I have been finding real passion with Stacy and she is so nice. But I knew you would not approve of her because of all her piercings, tattoos, tight motorcycle clothes and the fact that she is much older than I am. But it's not only the passion...Mom she's pregnant. Stacy said that we will be very happy. She owns a trailer in the woods and has a stack of firewood for the whole winter. We share a dream of having many more children.

Stacy has opened my eyes to the fact that marijuana doesn't really hurt anyone.We'll be growing it for ourselves and trading it with the other people that live nearby for cocaine and ecstasy. In the meantime we will pray that science will find a cure for AIDS so Stacy can get better. She deserves it. Don't worry Mom. I'm 15 and I know how to take care of myself. Someday I'm sure that we will be back to visit so that you can get to know your grandchildren.

Love,
Your Son Jon


P.S. Mom, none of the above is true. I'm over at Tommy's house. I just wanted to remind you that there are worse things in life than the report card that's in my center desk drawer.

I love you.
Call me when it's safe to come home.



HAHAH I LOVE IT ROFLMAO
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QUOTE (DARK LYK ZAK @ Feb 24 2008, 09:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
HAHAH I LOVE IT ROFLMAO



lol thx my friend did something similar to that and so I descided I would write about it
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Oh if i get a bad report I am SO doing that smile.gif
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QUOTE (DARK LYK ZAK @ Feb 24 2008, 10:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Oh if i get a bad report I am SO doing that smile.gif

lol ok.. have fun ^^
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I really like the first one, and fantasy is great too ^^
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QUOTE (Dark_Ness @ Feb 25 2008, 09:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I really like the first one, and fantasy is great too ^^



yeah I had fun writing fantasy
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the fantasy one really had me daydreaming...good job
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QUOTE (helpmehold @ Feb 26 2008, 11:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
the fantasy one really had me daydreaming...good job




ok.. weird.. but thx
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wow brilliant. i especialy love the one with the letter found it hilarious smile.gif brilliant poems smile.gif


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QUOTE (yopi40 @ Feb 27 2008, 03:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow brilliant. i especialy love the one with the letter found it hilarious smile.gif brilliant poems smile.gif

lol thx as I said before my friend did the same thing so I discided to write a poemish thing about it =P
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I absolutly LOVE these.
I wanna write as good as you.

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QUOTE (xMusicIsLovex @ Feb 27 2008, 07:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I absolutly LOVE these.
I wanna write as good as you.

aww thx!
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great poems....love it.... Love.gif
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QUOTE (CutmeDeep @ Feb 28 2008, 12:08 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
great poems....love it.... Love.gif

lol thx
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