Poem aside, you do have a bit of growing up to do, but who doesn't at 14? I used to cut, I thought it helped me get through life, but in reality it was only hindering me from getting stronger and being able to deal with stress on my own without cutting. You're only 14, the problems you face at your age (or any age for that matter) don't call for cutting, just learning how to deal with them as an adult. Losing a boyfriend or whatever else is wrong isn't the end of the world, even though it hurts, and cutting yourself might distract you from the pain temporarily, you are actually only masking it, plus making an even bigger problem for yourself in the future. I hope you will think about this & stop cutting before it gets to the point it did with me, I finally did stop, almost a year ago & I'm proud that I did. I'm not ashamed that I cut, I know how I felt at the time, even though I was wrong, and I don't get mad at myself for what I did, even though I wish that I hadn't. Anyway, if you need to talk to somebody feel free to shoot a PM to me, I'll listen to whatever you're going through, but only as long as you try not to be dramatic about it & list every little thing in your life that isn't perfect.
Now On topic, your poem isn't so bad, but I generally don't like poems about cutting because it worries me that it will make it seem popular or cool to do it, I did mention cutting in my last poem, I was reluctant to at first because I didnt want to encourage it, but I wanted people who have felt/done the same to be able to connect with it, and hopefully stop cutting just as I did.
Fucking. Long. Post..... It should count as 2 =P I will shut up now.
Well thanx hunn its good to find someone to talk to i worry my parents alot