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Well personal as in 'my life' personal.
Stuff that no-one on here knows about.
Actually NO-ONE.


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Woah, that was sooo good and really deap! I love it!
Hey i just realised something my fave bits are the same as LTR! smile.gif
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Thanks purexpoision!


Ohh well then never mind LTR, though I'd like to see your writing too.
Just a question, which do you prefer, poetry that rhymes or poetry that doesn't?
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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Mar 9 2008, 02:35 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Woah, that was sooo good and really deap! I love it!
Hey i just realised something my fave bits are the same as LTR! smile.gif

Great parts arnt they xD
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 02:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks purexpoision!


Ohh well then never mind LTR, though I'd like to see your writing too.
Just a question, which do you prefer, poetry that rhymes or poetry that doesn't?

And.... well I have some but they were all 'spare of the moment' so to speak.
I don't mind my poem 'Vultures' though. Check it out, see if you understand?
I rhymed eye with eye >< lmao

And a good old rythm poem is always great to read.
But if it doesn't rhyme
I feel it has to be deep. smile.gif
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Oh I read Vultures it's so good!
Haha you did rhyme eye with eye but whatever.
Awww post more!
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 03:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Oh I read Vultures it's so good!
Haha you did rhyme eye with eye but whatever.
Awww post more!

Lol, thanks ><
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Dead Inside, all what I said in that poem, was true at the time.
It was more an emotional time.
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Is that seriously the ONLY poem you've posted?
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 04:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Is that seriously the ONLY poem you've posted?

No I posted 4-ish I think.

Dead Inside < thats actually one of them lmao. (so check that one) it was an emotional time xD

The others dont bother about them. They were just showing someone something.
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 07:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No I posted 4-ish I think.

Dead Inside < thats actually one of them lmao. (so check that one) it was an emotional time xD

The others dont bother about them. They were just showing someone something.



Oh okay.
Hey do you think I should hand in one of my poems in as my English homework?
I'm not sure because I think I might get referred to the counselor...
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 03:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Oh okay.
Hey do you think I should hand in one of my poems in as my English homework?
I'm not sure because I think I might get referred to the counselor...

why would you get referred?
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 07:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
why would you get referred?


My poems aren't exactly 'positive' and my teacher is known for overreacting. I asked her if we could bring breath mints to the field trip and she told me to go out into the hall and I had a little "talk" with her.
Oh and she suggested that one of my classmates go to the counselor for his "identity problems" when he accidentally answered a question that she had asked a girl.
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 04:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
My poems aren't exactly 'positive' and my teacher is known for overreacting. I asked her if we could bring breath mints to the field trip and she told me to go out into the hall and I had a little "talk" with her.
Oh and she suggested that one of my classmates go to the counselor for his "identity problems" when he accidentally answered a question that she had asked a girl.
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Lol, your teacher sucks man.
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 07:44 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol, your teacher sucks man.
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Tell me about it.
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Just a question, which do you prefer, poetry that rhymes or poetry that doesn't?


I dont mind, my poem Always Alone has both rhyming in it and non-rhyming maybe you could check it ou hint* hint*

Ooh I read Vultures too, it was really cool!

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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Mar 11 2008, 05:35 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I dont mind, my poem Always Alone has both rhyming in it and non-rhyming maybe you could check it ou hint* hint*

Ooh I read Vultures too, it was really cool!


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I like Always Alone!
It's good and I like how you wrote the ending.
The words themselves at the end seem kinda lonely themselves....
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 11 2008, 11:06 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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I like Always Alone!
It's good and I like how you wrote the ending.
The words themselves at the end seem kinda lonely themselves....



Aww thanks, there ment to...

QUOTE (Different @ Mar 4 2008, 12:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I grab a knife

Push it into me

At last, I?m happy

I?m finally free.


I love the symbolism at the end of your poem, with the 'I'm finaly free'
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 11:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Oh okay.
Hey do you think I should hand in one of my poems in as my English homework?
I'm not sure because I think I might get referred to the counselor...


I'm giving my poem 'Always Alone' to my english teacher to see if I can submit it for coursework!
which reminds me I need to do the paragraph of why i wrote it and what its about...
cya Later!
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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Mar 12 2008, 06:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Aww thanks, there ment to...



I love the symbolism at the end of your poem, with the 'I'm finaly free'



Thanks!
Well you have to keep me updated on what happens to your poem!
If you submit it and the teacher doesn't send you to counseling, then I guess I'll hand in mine as well.
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