Leilanie I love you just to much to write down
when I look into your eyes I just drown
when my lips touch yours I fly away
if we're together I feel like I'm in heaven
I can't say enough that I love you
and no matter what you say I know I love you more
becouse I just melt when toutch me
and I can take on anything when you smile to me
I cant imagine life whitout you
becouse I love you and I hope you love me to
Ok its not good but its a start ... lollz just say what you think
I wrote this when I thought about my girlfriend and I just began writing
I didn't even knew what I was writing:P lollz
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My first Poem [or something like it]
Started by
vampireboy667
, Oct 30 2007 11:21 AM
#1
Posted 30 October 2007 - 11:21 AM
#2
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:41 AM
It is too good...very good!
Dont be so hard on yourself... :wink:
It doesnt really matter what others think..."To Each his own" in poetry.
If you like it, keep it, and If you dont, its yours to change!
I liked it :wink:
Dont be so hard on yourself... :wink:
It doesnt really matter what others think..."To Each his own" in poetry.
If you like it, keep it, and If you dont, its yours to change!
I liked it :wink:
#3
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:46 AM
yeah, all poetry is art.
its expressionof what u feel.
ilike it... its sweet...
sounds like u love her...:-)
keep it up..
u will get better and better, and appreciate ur work more the longer u keep it up:-)
its expressionof what u feel.
ilike it... its sweet...
sounds like u love her...:-)
keep it up..
u will get better and better, and appreciate ur work more the longer u keep it up:-)
#4
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:47 AM
thank you
#5
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:08 AM
It's cool.
I like it.
I like it.
#6
Posted 01 November 2007 - 11:50 PM
that made teary :cry:
its so sweet
Loved It
its so sweet
Loved It
#7
Guest__*
Posted 02 November 2007 - 01:41 AM
its great as i can relate
#8
Posted 02 November 2007 - 04:18 AM
it's really hot.. 8)
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Its not my fear of flying.. it's the fear of crashing down..
sweet dreams and flying machines are in pieces on the ground.. <3
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Its not my fear of flying.. it's the fear of crashing down..
sweet dreams and flying machines are in pieces on the ground.. <3
#9
Posted 02 November 2007 - 08:31 AM
ik vond deze zkr goed! :wink:
#10
Posted 02 November 2007 - 08:32 AM
(Hislordship)
ik vond deze zkr goed! :wink:
tnx man
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