The only steps I hear on the concrete are my own,
the whistle of the wind whips through branches as they're blown,
The darkness from the night casts shadows below,
To have a single friend by me, at least one to hold,
but I'm not frightened because I'm not afraid to walk alone,
this is all I've ever known,
Through pouring hail, Through blistering snow,
My lips may quiver, my bones may ache,
My flesh may bruise, bloody and blue,
My face may scar, my eyes may blur,
but the fire in my heart will always burn,
I keep moving along because I'm not too weak to walk alone
Just a little poem I came up with while thinking..
Yea.
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[Poem] Not Afraid To Walk Alone
Started by
Nolvie
, Feb 21 2012 11:51 PM
#1
Posted 21 February 2012 - 11:51 PM
#2
Posted 22 February 2012 - 01:04 AM
I AM NOT AFRAID TO KEEP ON LIVING
I AM NOT AFRAID TO WALK THIS WORLD ALONE
THE PRIEST SAYS IF I'M GAY I'LL BE FORGIVEN
NOTHING HE WILL SAY CAN STOP ME BLOWING LOADS
I AM NOT AFRAID TO WALK THIS WORLD ALONE
THE PRIEST SAYS IF I'M GAY I'LL BE FORGIVEN
NOTHING HE WILL SAY CAN STOP ME BLOWING LOADS
#3
Posted 22 February 2012 - 01:08 AM
not bad
#4
Posted 22 February 2012 - 01:09 AM
Pretty much.
#5
Posted 22 February 2012 - 01:52 AM
Wow.
#6
Posted 23 February 2012 - 05:39 AM
Well I actually like it =) It's short and sweet just like it should be =D
CONGRATS
CONGRATS
#7
Posted 23 February 2012 - 10:56 AM
i enjoyed reading this!
#8
Posted 26 February 2012 - 06:31 PM
i think it's pretty good. easy to relate to and a nice rhyme to it. good job
#9
Posted 18 March 2012 - 08:29 AM
this is my life.. this is my world .. why i chose it?? i do not know...
#10
Posted 18 March 2012 - 05:40 PM
Oh dear.
#11
Posted 19 March 2012 - 05:26 AM
It actually reminds me of Famous Last Words by My Chemical Romance:
"I am not afraid to keep on living, I am not afraid to walk this world alone."
"I am not afraid to keep on living, I am not afraid to walk this world alone."
#12
Posted 02 April 2012 - 09:35 PM
This hit's you in the heart and soul +1 for this I like it a lot
#13
Posted 07 April 2012 - 05:31 PM
REALLY GOOD.
#14
Posted 20 May 2012 - 12:05 AM
I enjoyed this, it is all ways a good thing to be reminded that something as simple as being able to walking alone, makes you one of the strongest.
#15
Posted 20 June 2012 - 11:28 AM
well, by god, Ed, you just about kicked the traditional image of youth poetry out the metaphorical window, didn't ya, bud?
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