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[Poem] Silent Screams</3

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Started by DInoDee<3 , Mar 07 2012 01:34 PM

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Poll: [Poem] Silent Screams</3 (12 member(s) have cast votes)

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  1. Eww.. Worst poem ever ! D: (1 votes [8.33%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 8.33%

  2. Not The Best. |: (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  3. It's Alright.. /: (2 votes [16.67%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 16.67%

  4. Pretty good. (: (1 votes [8.33%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 8.33%

  5. Amazingly deep <3 (8 votes [66.67%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 66.67%

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#1
DInoDee<3
Posted 07 March 2012 - 01:34 PM

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"Silent Screams ;
Can't Be Heard.
But, Can Be Seen.
With One Look Of Pain In The Eyes."
*DevinaDee.

- I'm Bleeding Tears.
My Heart Slows Down.
Depression Kills.
Oh, It Hurts The Most.
And To Know That You're Not Here.
And I Feel Like I Should Drown.
From All These Painful Memories.
Someone Stabbed Me.
I Am Empty.
All You Can Here Are Silent Screams.
I Am Choking.
On The Air That I Breathe.
I'm Wishing.
I'm Praying.
That This Is All Just A Dream.
Take Me Out Of My Misery.
And The Past, It Still Haunts Me.
Even When I Sleep.
Love.
It Hurts The Most.
How Can You Be So Cold.?
The Devil Took Control.
Stole My Happiness.
Made Me Feel Depressed.
I Know I Hafta.
Gotta Move On.
Yet, I Just Can't Let You Go.
Fragile.
Just Like Glass.
Has Fallen To The Ground.
Silent.
Has Left No Sound.
Broken.
To Pieces.
It Can't Be Repaired.
Left All These Scars.
Feeling In The Dark.
Just Take Me To The Stars.
I'm Weak.
I Wanna Believe.
Everything Will Be Fine.
But, It'll Just Be A Lie.
I'm Not Alive.
I've Already Died.
From All This Pain.
And I Bawl Out.
Yet, So Silent.
As I'm Bleeding From My Eyes.
And These Tear Drops.
They Are Falling.
One By One In Line.
I'm So Broken.
Left With Nothing.
But, The Endless Pain For Me.
It Is Silent.
Yet, No One Hears These Silent Screams.</3

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Posted 07 March 2012 - 04:32 PM

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Posted 07 March 2012 - 04:54 PM

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Huuuh ? ^

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Posted 07 March 2012 - 05:17 PM

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Huuuh ? ^

Comic Sans is a notorious font used and a lot of people hate it.

Also: Did you post this poem on any other websites at all?

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DInoDee<3
Posted 07 March 2012 - 05:53 PM

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Kay.
& Only a poetry site, that's it..

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Posted 07 March 2012 - 06:50 PM

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Kay.
& Only a poetry site, that's it..

Okay, just making sure because I found http://forums.family...?TOPIC_ID=23988 under the same username. I assumed it was you but I like to check anyway.

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DInoDee<3
Posted 07 March 2012 - 07:41 PM

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Ohh, yawpp.
That's deffinatly me.

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Posted 08 March 2012 - 03:25 AM

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Okay I love your poem I understands it completely (:

But the only thing is that every Line Is Like This

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Posted 08 March 2012 - 03:40 AM

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o lol

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Posted 08 March 2012 - 05:12 AM

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This describes exactly how I feel...

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Posted 08 March 2012 - 09:59 AM

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Glad you guys liked it & feel the same way..

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 07:44 PM

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i liked it :3 perty deep...

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 03:43 PM

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Glad you guys liked it & feel the same way..


Loved I feel that way a lot. Good work and thanks for sharing.

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Posted 05 June 2012 - 06:39 PM

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i really liked it, i felt like that every day for years, i still do sometimes
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