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[JustinaMakesMiracles]

Our love was so complete
Why'd you have to cheat
Your voice is so sweet
Too bad it's used to mistreat
Your kiss is such a treat
Too bad it burned me
You don't need to compete
You're the best at deceit
My love for you won't deplete
I must accept defeat
My love for you is indescreet
Your love for me is incomplete

[JustinaMakesMiracles]

I try to drown out all these voices
That tell me i'm not good enough
I no longer have any choices
Cuase I always seem to mess things up
And all these obnoxious noises
Are making my mind go numb
And i've already consumed so much poison
But no, i'm not givin up

[JustinaMakesMiracles]

Monster In Disguise



Monster in diguise

You hide it very well

You cover it with your lies

You trap me with your spell

*Those beautiful eyes

Made my heart swell

*Those beautiful eyes

You are my belle

*Those beautiful eyes

mademoisell



(chorus)

You're such a liar

*You baited

You brought me higher

*You waited

You made me desire

*You sedated

My heart's fire

*Youe devoured

My entire

*Heart, soul, being

I'm faded



Monster in disguise

Now i know you sell

You sell my cries

You like the salty smell

Of my demise

*Those beautiful eyes

Watched me as i fell

*Those beautiful eyes

Put me through hell

*Those beautiful eyes

Now dispel



[Chorus]



*You baited

*You waited

*You sedated

*You devoured

*You dated, hated, rated

*You debated, You created, You're overrated



[Chorus]



Monster in disguise

With your beautiful eyes

Monster in disguise

With your beautiful lies

Monster in disguise

You cuased my demise

Monster in disguise

I tried to compramise

Monster in disguise

Call your allies

Monster in disguise

I just wanna know

*WHY



[Guitar]



Monster in disguise

With your beautiful eyes

*You baited

Monster in disguise

With your beautiful lies

*You waited

Monster in disguise

You caused my demise

*You sedated

Monster in diguise

I tried to compramise

*You devoured

Monster in disguise

Call your allies

*You dated, hated rated

Monster in disguise

I just wanna know

*You debated, you created, you're overrated

why

*why

why

*why

I just wanna know

*why

I just need to know

*WHY

YOU BETTER TELL ME

*why

*Why in the hell

why

just tell me

*WHY

[Steve]

Hey there! I merged all your lovely poems into one thread yay! If you want to know why, read the rules

[Despairl]

You have a way with words, oddly I like some of the combinations you use.

[JustinaMakesMiracles]

I love you
I love you too
I love you more
I love you most
I love you,
I'll save you from this evil ghost
I'll trade all my tomorrows
for one yesterday
Just so that you can stay
I love you, night til day
As long as you're next to me
You're the one that made me see
Just how beautiful life can be

[Lavinia]

That's just shockingly bad.

[Steve]

Merged your threads, it's also become painfully clear that you have no desire to even read the topics you post on here, otherwise you would have read the rules by now and known what to do, since I've told you to read them before. Or you can only speak in poems, which in that case:
Roses are red,
Violets are blue
Read the rules.

The only two good lines in your most recent poem:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gx4rSMlFPQk

[Kevin Johnson]

Some good poetry