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[Caleb Nelson]

Baby the sun is so bright on your face,
The way you walk and talk with such grace.

When you speak to me the angels sing, Heavens bell awaken to ring.

I could stare at you for eternity,
Baby your touch is my ecstasy.

So please don't remove your grasp,
And I'll even remove my mask.

The future we could have is so true,
I hope you feel like this to.

My heart is locked away tight,
Baby girl you had the might.

To bust my heart so wide,
And then crawl your way inside.

I hope you never get free,
But if you do you have my key.

so babe I'll ask one thing of you,
Make sure your answer is true.

If I was to give you my soul,
Would that make me your doll.

Would I sit on your shelf would the dust grow,
If it was to ever happen my tears would start to show.

Or would you let me protect you from the biggest hurricane,
Coz girl you know I would never leave you in the rain.

Fall asleep I'll be here when you awake,
Your trust is one thing I'll never take.

[Caleb Nelson]

To lose the thing that held your heart together,
The thing you thought you could hold forever.

I thought I could trust you to stand tall by me,
You had me to your self yet you still threw away my key.

So if you threw your self from a bridge I would jump for you not a second later,
You broke my heart and when it blew it left this crater.

A hole in my story to never cross your mind,
Your face was so gorgeous and so kind.

You tricked my heart and played a good game,
Line up the firing squad and finally take aim.

Shoot my heart to pieces and watch my drown in my own tears,
Because at this point in time I'm living my worst fears.

My eyes turn red from the truth that's been visible but unsaid,
That the love you had towards me has been long dead.

So rest your pretty head and sleep tight,
I guess I was right that I didn't have the might.

To say goodbye to you first and leave,
There was still a chance for us that's what I would believe.

[DirtyMindedLittleGirl]

That is unbelievably cute.
i love it.

[Caleb Nelson]

That is unbelievably cute.
i love it.

Thank you very much

[DirtyMindedLittleGirl]

Thank you very much

its all good:D

[Steve]

I merged your threads. Make sure to stick to one thread for your poems in future.

[Caleb Nelson]

Ah thank you my apologies first time doing it.

[12stonesfreak25]

THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL

[Caleb Nelson]

Well thank you I do love good feed back.

[Dynamodankk]

Awwwwwh.!!! The last one is my favorite ((:

[Caleb Nelson]

Thank you very much

[Brillix]

Haha cheezy but i like it alot. Keep posting

Edited by Sir Steve, 12 August 2012 - 11:19 PM.
No need to quote the whole poem