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The cold black night
Is not as cold as my heart
The white breath vanishes
Without a trace.
Trying to recall the reason
Why this keeps happening
Is this just an excuse
To run away from this feeling?
The reality is cruel
Resembling my true self
Looking into the mirror
A figure without a face.
There is no solution
To throw away this bad memory
It seems to be useless
The road is a dead end.
The scars that were lost
Appeared again somehow
The wraith comes to pay a visit
In despair
The haunting never stops.
I cannot do anything
I can do nothing
This unpleasant feeling
The black rose is dying.
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Black Rose
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Kurayami Michio
, Jun 15 2012 12:07 AM
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Posted 15 June 2012 - 12:07 AM
Kurayami Michio
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Posted 15 June 2012 - 01:14 AM
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I like it, some of the lines seems kind of force, not many, but some. Stanze five is a little iffy.
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Posted 16 June 2012 - 06:11 AM
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You have a great gift for poems. 
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Posted 31 July 2012 - 12:10 AM
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thanks for the comments guys. I appreaciate that
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Posted 02 August 2012 - 07:55 PM
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Great poem love it
Great poem love it
Great poem love it
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Posted 09 August 2012 - 07:15 AM
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I think it was pretty, it stands out 
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