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Cut, bleed, dead... (my first and vry emotional to me)


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Every morning I awake to a shit life
I get out of bed and look in the mirror
My reflection is soulless and empty
I put on jerseys in summer
For fear of people judging my broken wrists

I get in the car with my parents
Why am I so umcomfortable arouind them?
I arrive at school and head towaords my 'friends'
As soon as i get in ears reach
There words pierce my skin, i'm never good enough
At break I see my favorite people
Thet flirt, they lead me on
Maybe they accept me...

On the weekend i go to the parties
I buy alcohol because it's the only way i can be happy
I constantly look in the mirror
I think I look good
Hope that tonight is the night she loves me like I love her
I go to find her
She is with another guy
I must be revolting
Is there hapiness
Drown my sorrow with alcohol
My heart destroyed by rejection

I begin to cry
I take out the razor
and cut, cut, cut
Replace one pain with another
Who will care if i disappear
Maybe i should die
I want to die
Then no one could hurt me again
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dark angle

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I really love this peom!
But it makes me want to cry
in a good way because it is really good
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That's Really Good, And Really Sad!!
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thanks guys, that means alot to me
i love poetry
and
yes its sad but so true
i cried while i wrote it
and it felt gud
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wow i love this i realy do lots of things like the alcohol part and the love part our so me
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well hey emotions make the best poetry

and yours is really good
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its really good...
kinda basic, like straightforward...
not a lotta metaphors...
kinda unexpected in a nice way
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tht poem was soo awsome i loved it
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