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[katattack]

A girl sits in her room,
staring at the sharp blade of a new razor.
Her wrists still sting from last nights encounter,
but that's the point.
She wants the pain,
she needs the pain.

She cannot deal with her problems anymore,
her inner turmoil anymore.
They're getting worse,
she keeps hiding her pain inside,
her thoughts inside,
never to be spoken.

Her parents keep fighting ,
her sister only cares about herself,
and her lover put her through a year of hell.

She grabs it and cuts deep,
blocking her train of thought from continuing.
She sighs deeply and relaxs as the blood flows.

She wishes that someone would take her away,
she wishes she could be happy,
she wishes she didn't have to hide.

Her blood mixes with tears as she slowly goes numb.
Better,but worse as well.
Another sleepless night,
thinking no one would care,
if she just faded away.

[Brillix]

Remindes me of that song the way she feels by between the trees

[Musu :*]

that's very good.i like the ending.i hope it's not how u feel..

[lonezwolf]

Touching stuff dude

[Brillix]

I like it. Kinda deep