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The sky is gray, clouds building up,
The boats are gently bobbing up and down.
The lovers in the park pulling their coats tighter,
The dogs barking up there own little storm.

As the sky grows dark the city lights come on,
But tonight they're muted,
Not so bright, it's a soft light.
A car alarm blares in the distance,
The birds have taken flight,

The rain comes down hard,
Battering the rose bushes,
Each drop has a sound,
Each drop glistening,
Looking enchanting.
Not all storms are bad,
Sometimes they bring rain,
Others, they bring change.
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You used proper spelling and grammar so that's a plus. This isn't half bad, I liked where my imagination took me while reading it.

Edited by Steve , 02 December 2012 - 08:40 AM.
No need to quote the whole OP

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