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The Boy Who Saw The World

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Ross Walton

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This is a poem i wrote when me and my girlfriend (now ex) had doubts about each other, we managed to sort it out for a while but we split up in the end :'( tell me what you think guys...

 

 

The boy who saw the world

 

When you look at the world
and all you see is black
you feel like it’s all
just weighing on your back

 

When you look at the sky

And see there’s nothing there

You must open your eyes

And look through that mess of black hair

 

When you’re with a loved one

And you look into her eyes

But all you can see

Is a conundrum of lies

 

When she holds out her hand

And hugs you ever so tight

You feel like the world

Is relinquished of all plight

 

But then she takes a step back

And your heart moves to your throat

She turns and walks away

Leaving you to drown in a moat

 

But then you look up

Through that mess of black hair

And you come to realise

That’s she has always been there

 

Standing right beside you

Pulling you out of the mud

She brushes of the filth

And you see, she has always understood…………………


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That's really sweet. Its cool you write poetry. I like the "But then she takes a step back" paragraph. That's how I feel when i'm reading a book with romance and they stop being romantic. Not that their broken up just they aren't currently in the same location together. You know what I mean? If only I would love to be able to say I have had that experience in real life but I'm sort of a loner.


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If only I would love to be able to say I have had that experience in real life but I'm sort of a loner.

Relevance. There is none. 


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