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What I Have Been Writing

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Here are the two most recent pieces i have written and liked. Feedback would be great :) :

 

Blue Eyes By My Side

Blue eyes, filled with pain,
I'll be your hero, your hand to hold.
Blue eyes, filled with pain,
I will be your friend, your best friend to be exact, to the very end.

That beautiful smile, the one that lights me up inside,
On your face, that smile should stay.
That beautiful smile, the one that lights me up inside,
The laugh that accompanies it, is one way that i know you are ok.

The best friend, i have always needed,
Take my hand, Never let it go.
The best friend, i have always needed,
I know that you will be there for me no matter the weather.

The words you speak, always have meaning,
The advice you give, always gets me through.
Inspiration, is something you have, strength as well,
You speak your mind, even if its just to me.

The strength you have keeps me going,
Knowing that you are there, makes me feel like i am special.
The strength you have, keeps me going,
Knowing that i can rely on you.

 

With you by my side, i can do anything,
You are the reason i smile, Always
With you by my side, i can do anything,
This is where i am meant to be!

We all wish for things to be simple,
But challenges are what make life.
We all wish for things to be simple,
But simplicity, is not always what it seems.

 

 

Believe 

 

 

She is locked up inside,

She can't escape.

She can't escape her thoughts,

Those thoughts she doesn't want to think about.

These Thoughts are holding her back,

Holding her back from her true potential.

 

She has trouble believing in herself,

But she needs to start believing in herself.

Taking it one step at a time,

With someone there guiding her.

Because she needs someone,

Who wont leave her side.

 

I know what it feels like to be locked up inside,

Thinking i couldn't escape.

Thinking i couldn't escape my thoughts,

Those thoughts that i didn't want to think about.

Those throughts were holding me back,

Holding me back from my true potential.

 

I had trouble believing in myself,

But i learnt to start believing in myself.

Taking it one step at a time,

With someone guiding me,

Who wouldn't leave my side.

 

 

Oh yes,

It was hard.

Once i got the hang of it,

It wasn't so hard to believe in myself.

 

Oh yes,

It is hard.

I just want you to believe in yourself,

Just take it one step at a time.

 

 


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I have no words to describe this lovely piece.

 

That beautiful smile, the one that lights me up inside,
On your face, that smile should stay.

 

Stunning, truly.


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I liked them ^_^


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I have no words to describe this lovely piece.

 

 

Stunning, truly.

Awww thank you.

 

I liked them ^_^

haha thanks :)


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