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[Art] Pointillist


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Navou

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After a great first term of school I would like to share one of my completed art projects for some feedback. So far I have been told that more dotting is needed around the nose and neck. Criticism would be great.

 

Pointillist - Uses a fine black tip felt pent to dot the portrait.

 

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The face bothers me, it seems kinda fat. Like strange. But I do like the rest of it. :D


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Well it is on an A3 piece of paper and it may be a bit weird because of the style. Here is the original photo. I went off both colour and black/white copies

 

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I think it may look a bit strange because of the angle of the head and the neck. Maybe the right cheek should've been a bit rounder.

But really, I'm not one to judge. The pointillism looks great from what I can see. Love the way you did the hair. :) 


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