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M4dR1L3y

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Im really proud of this poem; not for grammatical reasons or because its breathtaking or epic or anything but because its cheerful and expresses my feeling toward my closest friends.


There are these people
All around me
Who have abilities
I'd almost call them
Superpowers
How I wish
I could be like them
If there could be a day
Where I'd walk in the room
And people fall
To their knees
Just to please me
But no
That is not I
Or perhaps
Be quick witted
Able to curve the lips
Of everyone and anyone
Who dare listen to the words
spoken so intelligently
He who has
Many hidden talents
That I see so easily
Yet he denies
But no
That is not I
To be she
Whom cares wholeheartedly
Full of empathy
And advice
Always praising
Willing to throw away
Her life
If it were to save
That of someone she deeply cares
If only she saw
What I see
Intelligence lurking
Beneath the surface
A person who loves fully
But no
That is not I
He who's finger work miracles
Understanding
The foreign language
Of our day and time
Caring and compassionate
So deeply brilliant
Yet a king
Of that which no one sees but I
Afraid of unwanted attention
Underestimated
And deserves
So much more
And no
That is not I
I
I am surrounded by great people
How could I ask for more?
My friends
Are everything to me
To them I can't
Fully express
The depths of my feelings
And my gratitude
I
I am a selfish person
And I pray
That these great people
Will stay
By my side
For as long as they can stand me
And yes
That is indeed I



So, yeah, alright, rip it up!! :D

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That was awesome.  :Applause:


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Awe thank you! I think you just want me to have a good day! You're succeeding :)
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that was crazy good :D


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