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Hazardous Waste

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    Tortured Rose

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Her hands are shaking
Her body is quaking
Her mind is spinning
She should be sleeping
Her eyes are streaming
Her heart is breaking
Her strength is failing
Her hope is waning
Her life is changing
Her child is missing...





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    Spiraling Tempest

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I love this. Simple, clear...just good! I would add some commas to the line ends, with periods after spinning and breaking, but that's just grammatical

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