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Dusky Deception

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In the far off lands of tranquility,
My mind slept, reciting your parting phrase.
My heart lied awake, piecing the discreet,
Skimming memories that are now but a haze,
Now but a faded conglomeration of deceit.

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Maybe friend, in that far off worldly-delusion,
There is no sound, no force to be found.
It lies under the shade of illusion.
Its appealing façade lies in shroud.

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Mewl in meek, and plead dreadfully in seek.
Not for lost treasure, friend, but for right.
The blue depth has withered into the bleak,
Should you care to see? Care for that distant light?

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Three autums have passed, friend, three years old.
Did that glimpse of light not reach you, blind thing?
Your eyes are frosty, a trio winters cold.
Did this shallow dusk of day not make you cling?
Cling to life with new claws, and rest?

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Dusk does not bring an end, friend,

Because now my heart is in peace,

And my mind cannot sleep.

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It is a very interesting poem, and I can relate to some of the emotions you expressed, especially in the middle and final stanzas.


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Thank you! I wasn't expecting anyone to comment for awhile! (*^o^*)
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