Heartless Lies - Lied, Screem from pain
Everyday a new slit,
Death is only one way to end it all,
maybe one day my life will show,
as one guy dies,
to save his own life,
Lied, Screem from pain,
His heart screems out,
Tryed to become one of the dead,
Knife in his heart,
But he carrys on,
Flash back to the past. (screem)
Lied to die. (sing) }
Li-ed to-oo di-e }
As I cry for life,
Death creaps closer, (silent echo)
Guted and named,
Named and shamed,
Death is only one way out,
When all your friends will shout,
Lied, Screem from pain,
His heart screems out,
Tryed to become one of the dead,
Knife in his heart,
But he carrys on,
Lied to die. (sing) }
Li-ed to-oo di-e }
I share my life, Show you how,
But i still die, NOW!
Kill me again,
Oh, Go-d help me.
Lied, Screem from pain,
His heart screems out,
Tryed to become one of the dead,
Knife in his heart,
But he carrys on,
Lied, Screem from pain,
His heart screems out,
Tryed to become one of the dead,
Knife in his heart,
But he carrys on.
Copyright İ Jordan Parker 2008. All Rights Reserved.
This is my first song, i wrote it for my band, I just hope the lyrics are good.İ
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Hartless Lies - Lied, Screem From Pain
Started by
Jordan
, Mar 22 2008 03:47 PM
#1
Posted 22 March 2008 - 03:47 PM
#2
Posted 23 March 2008 - 03:45 AM
That is amazing ! one of these days you are going to be famous , not for your singing , but for your spirit ! I LUV IT !
#3
Posted 23 March 2008 - 03:47 AM
Awww, thank you Cassie.
#4
Posted 23 March 2008 - 03:49 AM
welcome but it realy touched me
#5
Posted 23 March 2008 - 04:32 AM
#6
Posted 23 March 2008 - 04:40 AM
well decent but it's not gonna be considered a great song.sorry.
#7
Posted 23 March 2008 - 05:08 AM
Better try again.
#8
Posted 23 March 2008 - 08:30 AM
it is really good i like it
the beginning was the best bit
the beginning was the best bit
#9
Posted 23 March 2008 - 08:47 AM
how is it not good ? It is apsalutly AMAZING!
#10
Posted 23 March 2008 - 09:01 AM
This is a really good song/poem. A few spelling mistakes but the emotion was really strong. 4.5/5.
#11
Posted 02 April 2008 - 06:08 PM
My band seem to like it. 8-)
#12
Posted 03 April 2008 - 01:23 AM
really good song dude...
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