Jump to content

Welcome to Emo Forums
Register now to gain access to all of our features. Once registered and logged in, you will be able to create topics, post replies to existing threads, give reputation to your fellow members, get your own private messenger, post status updates, manage your profile and so much more. If you already have an account, login here - otherwise create an account for free today!
Photo

Pass On The Shakespeare?


  • This topic is locked This topic is locked
32 replies to this topic

#1
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
So it's kinda like pass on the story / pass on the poem
Except a tiny bit harder, because it has to be formatted right
The format is a sonnet.
So basically, one person adds a line
((if you don't know what a sonnet is formatted like, every line has 10 syllables, and the rhyming pattern is:
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
F
E
F
G
G))

I'll start it off. I guess after one sonnet is done, the next person can start a new sonnet?


No one knows the words that are on my lips,
  • 0

#2
Just Jen

Just Jen

    love you all <3

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,973 posts
or the song that plays in my mind
  • 0

#3
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE
No one knows the words that are on my lips,

Or about how I play on the highway,


**Belongingnowhere you didn't do 10 syllables
  • 0

#4
Just Jen

Just Jen

    love you all <3

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,973 posts
sorry, i'll do better next time
  • 0

#5
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
  • 0

#6
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 07:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -

"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
  • 0

#7
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
  • 0

#8
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 07:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,

Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
  • 0

#9
Just Jen

Just Jen

    love you all <3

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,973 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 05:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,

and pain bled out of the shaking body
  • 0

#10
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
  • 0

#11
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 07:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say,
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,

Body parts on windshields of cars abound
  • 0

#12
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,
  • 0

#13
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 08:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,

Until they let loose the riot police,
  • 0

#14
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,
Until they let loose the riot police,
To whom I rebuttle with packs and fleets,
  • 0

#15
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 08:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,
Until they let loose the riot police,
To whom I rebuttle with packs and fleets,

Too bad their beating of me shall not cease
  • 0

#16
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,
Until they let loose the riot police,
To whom I rebuttle with packs and fleets,
Too bad their beating of me shall not cease,
'cos one day, I'll end up behind brass bars.
  • 0

#17
Geist

Geist

    Comrade Fail

  • Banned
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 1,522 posts
QUOTE (Morbid Dreams @ Mar 24 2008, 08:18 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one knows the words that are on my lips,
Or about how I play on the highway,
So I will come close and tell you all this -
"Oh shit!" is the last thing those that trip say.
For their heads will be bloodied by a car,
Their foul intestines strewn upon the ground,
Their limbs will be severed and thrown afar,
Body parts on windshields of cars abound.
Screaming and chaos always fills the streets,
Until they let loose the riot police,
To whom I rebuttle with packs and fleets,
Too bad their beating of me shall not cease,
'cos one day, I'll end up behind brass bars,

My red butthole a display case of mars.
(as in mar, not Mars the planet)


I would like to take this moment to direct you to the poetry section, where one of my fantastic works is on display.
  • 0

#18
oops gone

oops gone

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 3,390 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Country
  • Fav Band Silence
Probably Will. And I'll go post this there too. Lol.
  • 0

#19
Jagged Hero

Jagged Hero

    Nigrescent Black Hole

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 611 posts
does anybody wanna start a new one?
  • 0

#20
Crispin

Crispin

    ...

  • Full Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 11,282 posts
  • Gender:Not Telling
  • Country
  • Fav Band _
I thought sonnets were 14 lines? or have i got my english revision all wrong?
  • 0




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users