You kissed me light
you kissed me true
you held my hand
and my heart too
you held me up
you cut me down
you helped me fly
you helped me drown
you saved the day
you ended the world
and all i can say is this
if only i could...
i envy mimes
for a simple reason
if their heart breaks
it's not treason
to their silent vows
the event is so quiet they might not know
and if that's true,
then on with the show.
if only i could continue life
as if you'd never been there
to cause my strife
just wanted you to know
above all and all
a little angry warning: you reap what you sow
so you'll be coming back to me
and i can't wait
because maybe this time true love it will be
but i know it's not fate
well fuck you without a doubt
'cause now i'll compare you to a trout!
(ok, the last line is a little weird. tee hee)
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Deep,dark, Meaningful Stuff From A Black Hole
Started by
CannibalCookie
, Mar 26 2008 12:42 PM
#1
Posted 26 March 2008 - 12:42 PM
#2
Posted 26 March 2008 - 04:24 PM
the mimes bit was good but the rest is typical emo stuff.
#3
Posted 26 March 2008 - 09:20 PM
QUOTE (lostandneverfound @ Mar 26 2008, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You kissed me light
you kissed me true
you held my hand
and my heart too
you held me up
you cut me down
you helped me fly
you helped me drown
you saved the day
you ended the world
and all i can say is this
if only i could...
i envy mimes
for a simple reason
if their heart breaks
it's not treason
to their silent vows
the event is so quiet they might not know
and if that's true,
then on with the show.
if only i could continue life
as if you'd never been there
to cause my strife
just wanted you to know
above all and all
a little angry warning: you reap what you sow
so you'll be coming back to me
and i can't wait
because maybe this time true love it will be
but i know it's not fate
well fuck you without a doubt
'cause now i'll compare you to a trout!
(ok, the last line is a little weird. tee hee)
you kissed me true
you held my hand
and my heart too
you held me up
you cut me down
you helped me fly
you helped me drown
you saved the day
you ended the world
and all i can say is this
if only i could...
i envy mimes
for a simple reason
if their heart breaks
it's not treason
to their silent vows
the event is so quiet they might not know
and if that's true,
then on with the show.
if only i could continue life
as if you'd never been there
to cause my strife
just wanted you to know
above all and all
a little angry warning: you reap what you sow
so you'll be coming back to me
and i can't wait
because maybe this time true love it will be
but i know it's not fate
well fuck you without a doubt
'cause now i'll compare you to a trout!
(ok, the last line is a little weird. tee hee)
that poem was pretty good, esp the mimes bit.
its very catchy.
i like the trout part
#4
Posted 26 March 2008 - 09:32 PM
Nice contrast.
I enjoyed it very much!
I enjoyed it very much!
#5
Posted 01 April 2008 - 01:30 PM
yeah, i kinda realized it sounded over emo after i reread it. i like the trout thing and the mime part too.
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