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Deep,dark, Meaningful Stuff From A Black Hole


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You kissed me light
you kissed me true
you held my hand
and my heart too

you held me up
you cut me down
you helped me fly
you helped me drown

you saved the day
you ended the world
and all i can say is this
if only i could...

i envy mimes
for a simple reason
if their heart breaks
it's not treason
to their silent vows
the event is so quiet they might not know
and if that's true,
then on with the show.

if only i could continue life
as if you'd never been there
to cause my strife
just wanted you to know
above all and all
a little angry warning: you reap what you sow

so you'll be coming back to me
and i can't wait
because maybe this time true love it will be
but i know it's not fate
well fuck you without a doubt
'cause now i'll compare you to a trout!



(ok, the last line is a little weird. tee hee)
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the mimes bit was good but the rest is typical emo stuff.
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QUOTE (lostandneverfound @ Mar 26 2008, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You kissed me light
you kissed me true
you held my hand
and my heart too

you held me up
you cut me down
you helped me fly
you helped me drown

you saved the day
you ended the world
and all i can say is this
if only i could...

i envy mimes
for a simple reason
if their heart breaks
it's not treason
to their silent vows
the event is so quiet they might not know
and if that's true,
then on with the show.

if only i could continue life
as if you'd never been there
to cause my strife
just wanted you to know
above all and all
a little angry warning: you reap what you sow

so you'll be coming back to me
and i can't wait
because maybe this time true love it will be
but i know it's not fate
well fuck you without a doubt
'cause now i'll compare you to a trout!



(ok, the last line is a little weird. tee hee)



that poem was pretty good, esp the mimes bit.
its very catchy.
i like the trout part biggrin.gif
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Nice contrast.
I enjoyed it very much!
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yeah, i kinda realized it sounded over emo after i reread it. i like the trout thing and the mime part too.
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