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Smiling Inside, Dying Outside


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Smiling ouside
Crying inside
A new sunrse
Burns the midnight sky
Burns my hope
A hope for salvation
I'm the sholder to cry on
the happy blond
the crazy nutcase

on the outside


Inside I'm scared and crying
I'll shut my eye
I dont want to see
A creul and unforgiving world
But my atemts fail
It's no good
So I'll stand up
My razor lying red and forgotten
It lies cold on the floor
I wipe my tears
Force on a smile
Because I'm the happy one
The one who's always smiling
The one with no problems
The pretty girl

I'm not pretty

I'm a attractive, maybe
But the things I've done aren't
I'm a monster toying with emotions
An ugly person
Please dont look at me
Dont tell me I'm pretty
Just kill me


Smiling inside
Dying inside
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The poem is alright. The forum placement... kinda blows.

http://www.emo-corne...php?showforum=5
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Its a bit blunt IMHO.

Diddnt really touch me.
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It didn't really seem to have much emotion.
And the Emo Poem forum would've been the place to post it.
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QUOTE (Niks Black Heart @ Mar 27 2008, 06:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It didn't really seem to have much emotion.
And the Emo Poem forum would've been the place to post it.


I'm kind new to posting....
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QUOTE (Silent.Tear.Shine.Bright @ Mar 31 2008, 08:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm kind new to posting....

okay just remember that for next time.
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QUOTE (OHMYLOVELYGOSH @ Mar 27 2008, 02:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Its a bit blunt IMHO.

Diddnt really touch me.


Thanks for being honest!
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QUOTE (Silent.Tear.Shine.Bright @ Mar 31 2008, 08:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks for being honest!

he's good with that, the honesty bit.
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i feel the same!!
it felt like it was about me!
loved it!
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I dont know why Im looking at older poems, but ya, I really must disagree with what these people have been saying. I really like this poem. I feel like its really describing, in a sense, how Im feeling alot lately. Im glad you posted it, keep up the good work.
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i really like this cuz i can relate. it was really well written in my opinion.
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