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Xx Together We Will Die Xx


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Xx Together We Will Die xX

The gurl speaking is in pink, the guy in green and when they talk together its in purple

Tonight here we lay,
Deciding this is the day,
When goodbye we cant say
,


Here in this spot,
Its were i belong,
In his arms, its heaven its here,
I kno that at least hes near,
Even though these thoughts arent clear
The tears that exit my eyes
Only reveal the fears i cry


(looking at her) DOnt cry im here,
At least you kno im near,
I love you because you're you,
I love you as the rain falls,
I love you, i gave you my all,
Today is the day when i guide us
Into the beautiful life you deserve


Laying on this floor,
Its here we dont want to be anymore,
Locked is the door,
In each others arms, The pain its still sore,
I love you I love you more than ever ,
I love more than even the grey weather


Baby im cold, Please make me warm,
With the blade next to me,
My eyes cant believe what they see,
The open wound on my wrist
These problems theres a list,
i love is all i insist,
These thoughts of why im leaving are here,
Now although theyre not clear,
I kno soon i wont be near
My eyes are closing, my dreams are fading,
My love for you remains


Here she lays in my arms,
Dying as she leaves this world,
They only caused her pain,
Now i was her rescue again,
Once more will i save her,
And now im taking her from this place,
The one where she was torn like lace,
I see her eyes close,
I say i will be there soon


Here we are,
In the land thats not far,
Were i am gorgous
Where things do no matter
And amazingly i dont shatter,
They never loved us,
We are gone now,
In our world its full of amazement and wonder
Now im where i can be loved

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I love it!!!!
lol it's so good.... I love the immagry.
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Keep writing!!
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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Apr 1 2008, 05:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love it!!!!
lol it's so good.... I love the immagry.
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Keep writing!!


Thanks darl hey, im glad u liked it, yea it was based on me and my ex although i was rescued and he wasnt
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aww, i'm sorry about that...
[my turn lol, sorry in a weird mood...] are you ok?
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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Apr 1 2008, 05:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
aww, i'm sorry about that...
[my turn lol, sorry in a weird mood...] are you ok?


Nah thanks hey its alright, im ok now but i still have problems dealing with it like ive gained a lot of weight and the pressures lol from life it skilling me

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aww thats good it's alright.
i'm here if you need to talk at any time...smile.gif
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QUOTE (xx_i_cry_alone_xx @ Apr 1 2008, 05:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Xx Together We Will Die xX

The gurl speaking is in pink, the guy in green and when they talk together its in purple

Tonight here we lay,
Deciding this is the day,
When goodbye we cant say
,


Here in this spot,
Its were i belong,
In his arms, its heaven its here,
I kno that at least hes near,
Even though these thoughts arent clear
The tears that exit my eyes
Only reveal the fears i cry


(looking at her) DOnt cry im here,
At least you kno im near,
I love you because you're you,
I love you as the rain falls,
I love you, i gave you my all,
Today is the day when i guide us
Into the beautiful life you deserve


Laying on this floor,
Its here we dont want to be anymore,
Locked is the door,
In each others arms, The pain its still sore,
I love you I love you more than ever ,
I love more than even the grey weather


Baby im cold, Please make me warm,
With the blade next to me,
My eyes cant believe what they see,
The open wound on my wrist
These problems theres a list,
i love is all i insist,
These thoughts of why im leaving are here,
Now although theyre not clear,
I kno soon i wont be near
My eyes are closing, my dreams are fading,
My love for you remains


Here she lays in my arms,
Dying as she leaves this world,
They only caused her pain,
Now i was her rescue again,
Once more will i save her,
And now im taking her from this place,
The one where she was torn like lace,
I see her eyes close,
I say i will be there soon


Here we are,
In the land thats not far,
Were i am gorgous
Where things do no matter
And amazingly i dont shatter,
They never loved us,
We are gone now,
In our world its full of amazement and wonder
Now im where i can be loved





O..O gosh,,

this poem really spoke to me, in more ways then one,
i want to thank you for writing it. i have had these thoughts too, and my lover has the same,
but i am going to read this to him,

thank you.

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QUOTE (gone_for+now @ Apr 1 2008, 04:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
O..O gosh,,

this poem really spoke to me, in more ways then one,
i want to thank you for writing it. i have had these thoughts too, and my lover has the same,
but i am going to read this to him,

thank you.

gone_for+now


Thank you im glad it did in more ways than one, thats what i try to achieve with all of my poetry even if it speaks to only one person ill be happy smile.gif Thanks again

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