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All is now dead,
staring up at the moonlight,
all those thing i never said,
god she did not even put up a fight.

I'm now in the dead of night,
All is quite,
Theres mist now rolling in so theres a haze in my sight,
I look back at the body there is nothing by it,
She so cold I pick her up with all my might.

A window is open,
Now that mist is spilling in,
Cold air come rushing its some kinds token,
The night goes on and so my head start to spin.

What have i done god what have i done,
Dusk has long gone from her life,
I reach for the pills hate it when my head spun,
Pills dont work they take long a grab a knife and with one slice.

I'm now by her looking up in the sky,
As i slowly drify into madness,
I'm still hold that thing she gave me that tie,
Body is cold im not bloodness.

Becka it was never meant to go this way,
All i wanted was us to be together,
Now i will forever pain,
At least this way we will be forever.

All is now dead.
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me and my frend luvd ur poem(she's emo 2)!!!!
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thank you ^-^
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really nice poem...keep it up Applause.gif
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thank you ^-^
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wOOOW

Oh My Good

That was soo Good...

Liked the flow of the poem also of the story......

I felt that B4 " don't ask how i did biggrin.gif "

Really u Got the ideas and the talent So We wait for More....

Liked It So much as manythings u wrote.... smile.gif


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aww thank you for that well more are coming along the way dot you worry bout that lol smile.gif
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QUOTE (BloodRose @ Apr 9 2008, 09:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thank you ^-^

no problem....
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Hey hun
I loved this poem hey it really touched me smile.gifsmile.gif
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thank you i just writ wot i feel at that time >_<
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loved it, i love the descriptions....
it was so good i cant pick a fave bit...
lol keep writing, i love your poems
xx
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thank you,
All the things i write they are all just what i feel.
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me too, no prob....
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That was lovely =]
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^.^ i cried...

that is my QUESTION

GOD what've i DONE!?!?!?!

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glad you like it

xx
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