So, this is a poem, I rushed it for english class, very last minute. I'd love to hear thoughts.
Shattered roots
And ripped up red
A never ending thought
Which my life is led
Tear bleached walls
From this familiar place
Lonely corners
Just another home.
A beautiful face
And a perfect personality
My sub-conscious
Is my new reality
Lonely nights
They share no end
I need you more than anything
You?re just my everything
Am I just a bleeding rose,
That stands alone?
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Bleeding Roses.
Started by
kiss~yourself~goodbye
, Apr 12 2008 05:13 AM
#1
Posted 12 April 2008 - 05:13 AM
#2
Posted 12 April 2008 - 08:56 AM
You rushed this through English class? Whoa. This is awesome, I can never 'rush' poems. I can never write them just like right now either, something has to inspire me. But just like all your other poems, this is amazing.
#3
Posted 12 April 2008 - 01:21 PM
Awesome poem. Best I've ever read...
#4
Posted 13 April 2008 - 09:20 AM
Holy crap - it's brilliant. Please tell me you overexaggerated the whole 'rushed it for english class' because it's not fair that you can write so well! Well done. I love it.
#5
Posted 13 April 2008 - 12:10 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Umm, ya, I wrote it for an english presentation that I totally forgot about so I had like 5 minutes to write it.
#6
Posted 14 April 2008 - 02:38 PM
Am I just a bleeding rose,
That stands alone?
I like this..
That stands alone?
I like this..
#7
Posted 14 April 2008 - 03:50 PM
i love it!
it was awesome!
u should read the one i rushed through my english class!!
it kinda sounds like urs.. just a little bit.
it's title is just idk... wrote it in class. ya....
it was awesome!
u should read the one i rushed through my english class!!
it kinda sounds like urs.. just a little bit.
it's title is just idk... wrote it in class. ya....
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