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To whom it concerns, my assignment is late.
It fell on my pancakes, and stuck to my plate.
To whom it concerns, my assignment's off time.
But who would notice an assignment of mine?
To whom it concerns, my assignment is due.
Can I borrow your paper, and copy off you?
To whom it concers, I'm good with a ball.
But guys don't notice tom-boys in the hall.
To whom it conerns, I'm good at writing.
It keeps me alive, it keeps me fighting.
To whom it concerns, there's nothing good about me.
When I look in the mirror, there's nothing I see.
To whom it concerns, I'm alone in the world.
But no one can see this lost little girl.
To whom it concers, I am not made of steel.
When I get blindsided, my pain is quite real.
I don't mean to whine, but it really burns.
So I just thought I'd mention it, to whom it concerns.
~~
Thoughts?
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To Whom It Concerns
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, Apr 14 2008 04:04 PM
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 04:04 PM
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 06:13 PM
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I can see your point.
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 06:14 PM
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very good, I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 06:35 PM
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 08:27 PM
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Wow, really good. I loved the flow of your poem.
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thx.
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that poem was on the Rosanne show a long time ago
i should know i love that poem
i should know i love that poem
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Posted 17 April 2008 - 04:17 PM
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QUOTE (F_O_B_ROX @ Apr 16 2008, 05:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
that poem was on the Rosanne show a long time ago
i should know i love that poem
i should know i love that poem
really? maybe that's how i got it. sometimes i get things i like stuck in my head on accident and then i use them in my poems. idk. but that's wierd.
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Posted 25 May 2008 - 07:05 PM
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QUOTE (F_O_B_ROX @ Apr 16 2008, 04:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
that poem was on the Rosanne show a long time ago
i should know i love that poem
i should know i love that poem
i knew i had heard that somewhere before..
O_o
i like it
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