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::suicide Note::

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QUOTE (Barcoded @ Apr 17 2008, 10:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

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The blood I shed means nothing at all
When will it be my Turn, my Time to fall
I hold the razor blade in my hand
Shaking, trembling, looking at the elastic bandI take my eyes off it and stair at my arm
I think to myself the words Self-Harm
Everyone asks why I do what I do
No one understand what they put me though
My thoughts finally stop and go away
There now is nothing anyone can do or say
I slowly place the razor blade on my wrist
My face burns, my eyes a cloudy mist
A single tear falls slowly from my face
I start to think again, my thoughts pace
I start to ask questions, like ?does anyone care?
And if so then why to they point and stare?
I stop and realize the blood on the floor
Is falls faster and faster, more and more
I place an old cloth on my battered wrist
I lay back on my bed with a clenched fist
I close my eyes and think of sweet dreams
Maybe tomorrow nothing will be as it seams
Everyone will like or love me for who I am
Or maybe they will look at me and won?t give a damn
I might as well end this sh*t now
But what will I do it with, and/or how
I write a short but thoughtful suicide note
And Slowly I slit my throat
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Do not worry its only a poem... Im not realy going to commet suicide....




I love your poem it was nice!
Keep up the work... Your really good!!

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wow!THAT REALY GOT TO ME.that was so good.that sertantly made my day.i wish i was able to right poetry like that.im rubbish. Applause.gif
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the font gives it a very uhhh edge of yourseat feel... if that does make sence..

i loved it ill give you a 9 nd a half wink.gif
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Thanx every one
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I love it, i read your disclaimer at the bottom about it not being a suicide note so i wasnt worried
but yea awesome poem, its deep Applause.gif
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lol
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very good,and deep.
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QUOTE (Emotional_Screamo @ Jul 21 2008, 10:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I know but i like the font i used in it.... and thanks for the comment.

This poem is one of the best on here.
You have realy touched on the feelings of many and it is as if you are about to comet suicide.
i was Taken by this and loved every sylabol
thank you so much for sharing


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its amazing! well done biggrin.gif

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