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Lol keep the font how you want it, its your poem....
I only put that so i could say the next line about it being worth the effort [for me] which it is... lol
and np just saying the truth, have you ever thought of being published??
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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Jul 21 2008, 02:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol keep the font how you want it, its your poem....
I only put that so i could say the next line about it being worth the effort [for me] which it is... lol
and np just saying the truth, have you ever thought of being published??

Nope. I just do it for the fun of it.

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kk, I understand.
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^

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QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Jul 21 2008, 02:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
kk, I understand.
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^

If you go to my profile there are topics there where i have written many poems. Take a look there. Don't forget to comment them smile.gif
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Beautful poem
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wow that was realy good. though tyhe topic wasnt so unique your choice of words were. it was interesting, and a bit frigtening. it drew me in, you akmost had me convinced to kill myself now, though i wouldnt. all in all, the poem was realy good.
keep it up!
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Thanks again every one for reading and commenting it. I really enjoy writing these poems..
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That was fantastic. Awesome job!
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QUOTE (xXMyBrokenRomanceXx @ Aug 9 2008, 10:58 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That was fantastic. Awesome job!

Thank you! <3
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Very good
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Wow I Am A [MAJOR] Cutter And Ur Poem Isz Like Exactly Hw I Feel
Awwsome Job!!
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Thanks for the comments.
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this is exactly what I feel i understand where ur coming from.
very good note!
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QUOTE (bLaCk Emo Grl @ Aug 10 2008, 12:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Wow I Am A [MAJOR] Cutter And Ur Poem Isz Like Exactly Hw I Feel
Awwsome Job!!


*sigh*

And I, lyk, ttlly thouht wii waz edjewkated peeps.
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QUOTE (NeW_FAce_OF_FAiLuRE @ Aug 11 2008, 12:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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I see left you speachless lol
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I really liked your poem, it was awesome
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its awesome!!
but the rythm is a bit dodgy at times
otherwise (Y) =D
8/10!!
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