Lol keep the font how you want it, its your poem....
I only put that so i could say the next line about it being worth the effort [for me] which it is... lol
and np just saying the truth, have you ever thought of being published??
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::suicide Note::
Started by
tim_is_brutal
, Apr 17 2008 10:45 PM
#21
Posted 21 July 2008 - 01:39 PM
#22
Posted 21 July 2008 - 01:43 PM
QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Jul 21 2008, 02:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol keep the font how you want it, its your poem....
I only put that so i could say the next line about it being worth the effort [for me] which it is... lol
and np just saying the truth, have you ever thought of being published??
I only put that so i could say the next line about it being worth the effort [for me] which it is... lol
and np just saying the truth, have you ever thought of being published??
Nope. I just do it for the fun of it.
#23
Posted 21 July 2008 - 01:45 PM
kk, I understand.
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^
#24
Posted 21 July 2008 - 01:55 PM
QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Jul 21 2008, 02:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
kk, I understand.
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^
I think you could be published though.
I know its not alot comming from me.
But, I think your good enough.
Anyways even if you do just do it for fun.
I still would like to see more of your work.
Keep writing ^.^
If you go to my profile there are topics there where i have written many poems. Take a look there. Don't forget to comment them
#25
Posted 21 July 2008 - 03:12 PM
#26
Posted 21 July 2008 - 03:58 PM
Beautful poem
#27
Posted 21 July 2008 - 04:44 PM
wow that was realy good. though tyhe topic wasnt so unique your choice of words were. it was interesting, and a bit frigtening. it drew me in, you akmost had me convinced to kill myself now, though i wouldnt. all in all, the poem was realy good.
keep it up!
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keep it up!
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#28
Posted 09 August 2008 - 10:44 AM
Thanks again every one for reading and commenting it. I really enjoy writing these poems..
#29
Posted 09 August 2008 - 10:58 AM
That was fantastic. Awesome job!
#30
Posted 09 August 2008 - 10:58 AM
QUOTE (xXMyBrokenRomanceXx @ Aug 9 2008, 10:58 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That was fantastic. Awesome job!
Thank you! <3
#31
Posted 10 August 2008 - 05:04 AM
Very good
Keep it up
Keep it up
#32
Posted 10 August 2008 - 11:33 AM
Wow I Am A [MAJOR] Cutter And Ur Poem Isz Like Exactly Hw I Feel
Awwsome Job!!
#33
Posted 11 August 2008 - 07:49 AM
Thanks for the comments.
#34
Posted 11 August 2008 - 09:46 AM
this is exactly what I feel i understand where ur coming from.
very good note!
very good note!
#35
Posted 11 August 2008 - 11:09 AM
i have nothing to say
#36
Posted 11 August 2008 - 11:30 AM
QUOTE (bLaCk Emo Grl @ Aug 10 2008, 12:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow I Am A [MAJOR] Cutter And Ur Poem Isz Like Exactly Hw I Feel
Awwsome Job!!
*sigh*
And I, lyk, ttlly thouht wii waz edjewkated peeps.
#37
Posted 12 August 2008 - 06:15 AM
QUOTE (NeW_FAce_OF_FAiLuRE @ Aug 11 2008, 12:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i have nothing to say
I see left you speachless lol
#38
Posted 12 August 2008 - 08:08 AM
I really liked your poem, it was awesome
#39
Posted 17 August 2008 - 08:17 AM
its awesome!!
but the rythm is a bit dodgy at times
otherwise (Y) =D
8/10!!
but the rythm is a bit dodgy at times
otherwise (Y) =D
8/10!!
#40
Posted 19 August 2008 - 06:05 AM
Thanx for the comments.
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