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I Hope You Burn.


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this sharp edge cutting through the skin,
all the while i'm wondering where you've been.
and it's not that i care anymore,
i'm aware that there's something new,
i just wish you'd come home so i can say, "fuck you."

you're just a whore and a liar,
who got lost in your "desire."
now we're all left bleeding from what you've done,
but you're too unaware,
of the throats you've wrung.

before you said, "i love you,"
i wish you would've thought about it.
then i never would have been worried,
to tell you about him.

i guess i can't really say this without being hypocritical,
but frankly i don't care.
as far as i'm concerned, my heart is no longer yours to share.
so just cut to the chase and we'll part our ways,
i'll let you wander shamelessly in your ignorant haze.

i hope you realize what you did,
and i'm not talking about me; but him.
you screwed everyone over,
you broke what was already so fragile and shattered.
i hope this new relationship leaves you bleeding and battered.

yesterday i took your picture,
from my broken-down door.
tore it in a million pieces,
and whispered, "fuck you, you whore."

the funny thing is, i could care less,
about how you got me into this mess.
but the fact that you hurt him at the worse possible time,
is, in itself, the worst of your crimes.


you're a liar and a hypocrite,
and you don't even notice what you did.
you fucked everyone over and now it's your turn,
oh, i hope to God you burn.

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yeah. so i'm a little pissed off.
get over it.
i have good reason to be. >.>

..the poem's kinda... bad. but i needed to get some thoughts off my chest.
better than nothing, i guess.

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omg....really really powerful...
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thanks, that was an awesome comment. happy.gif
glad you liked it. =]

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It got all your feelings out...
I think it has a huge impact on other people,
I think, quite frankly, it's one of the awesomest fucking poems I've ever read!
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wow... thanks for that comment, EMOATLANTIS. happy.gif very awesome, i'm glad you liked it to much!
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It was very powerful I liked it.
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This post is'nt about Eric...is it?*worried gaze*
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omg thta was so powerful xXx
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QUOTE (SuicideSami @ Apr 21 2008, 10:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It was very powerful I liked it.


thanks, i'm glad you did. =]

QUOTE (Seethergirl @ Apr 25 2008, 03:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This post is'nt about Eric...is it?*worried gaze*


might be... why?
just PM me or something and we'll talk about it.

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it was good im wel proud of my litl boy all groun up? my son ? your father and i r having pizza tonite ? do you want the same? wer all so proud of you?
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QUOTE (x.hEaRtS.&.rAzOrZ.x @ Apr 25 2008, 05:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
omg thta was so powerful xXx


thanks. =]

QUOTE (god bless @ Apr 26 2008, 02:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it was good im wel proud of my litl boy all groun up? my son ? your father and i r having pizza tonite ? do you want the same? wer all so proud of you?


huh?
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Loved that poem, very powerful.

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thanks Ripley. =]
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This reminds me of my brother

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Really powerful. and really well done, Taylor
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QUOTE (god bless @ Apr 26 2008, 01:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it was good im wel proud of my litl boy all groun up? my son ? your father and i r having pizza tonite ? do you want the same? wer all so proud of you?


dID YOU JUST CALL HER A GUY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GRRRRRR
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QUOTE (XXlovelesssXX @ Apr 26 2008, 07:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This reminds me of my brother


i'd say 'glad you can relate'... but it's kind of an angry poem, so i guess it wouldn't be good to relate to it. =P hehe

QUOTE (Niks Black Heart @ Apr 28 2008, 07:49 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Really powerful. and really well done, Taylor


thanks, Niks. happy.gif you always give awesome comments. =]

QUOTE (Seethergirl @ Apr 30 2008, 03:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
dID YOU JUST CALL HER A GUY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GRRRRRR


*waves hand* 's alright, i get that all the time.

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that is an awesome poem.. dnt wry bout it being mean or ne thing, i have written plenty of poems just as, if not, meaner than tht!!
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hehe, thanks. happy.gif
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