I look like shit.
I sound like shit ( I hate my voice, it sounds like a childs)
Here ya go.
Writers Block and Shy Professions of Love
http://s186.photobuc...=poemforyou.flv
I tried to write a poem for you,
But it gave me writers block.
I stare at this clean white page
And wonder what the fuck is wrong with me.
How dare it be so blank
Screaming at me.
Not even words,
That would be too helpful.
No, this was supposed to be for him
And you're ruining it.
Please stop.
This is childish.
I know all the words I could say,
But they trail off . . .
Leaving dead ends of half sounds.
Maybe . . .
I'll just say he's too good for words
And leave it at that.
That being done let me say I am not a fan of this. It is NOT my best.
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Poetry Slam Contest
Started by
Infinity
, Sep 02 2009 06:42 PM
#1
Posted 02 September 2009 - 06:42 PM
#2
Posted 02 September 2009 - 06:46 PM
You have no idea how much I love you for this.
#3
Posted 02 September 2009 - 07:09 PM
. . . uh-ho. why?
Am I the only one bravestupid enough to do it?
Am I the only one brave
#4
Posted 03 September 2009 - 08:16 AM
Massive nawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww : )
I smile at you.
Not too much of a fan of the actual poem but the deliver was nice : )
: )
note to self: Stop smiling
I smile at you.
Not too much of a fan of the actual poem but the deliver was nice : )
: )
note to self: Stop smiling
#5
Posted 05 September 2009 - 05:27 AM
it's good
#6
Posted 05 September 2009 - 05:30 AM
QUOTE (YoungLadErin @ Sep 3 2009, 03:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You have no idea how much I love you for this.
#7
Posted 05 September 2009 - 05:46 AM
QUOTE (RedMouth @ Sep 2 2009, 10:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
. . . uh-ho. why?
Am I the only one bravestupid enough to do it?
Am I the only one brave
No, I'm pretty sure we've got a couple more people doing it.
#8
Posted 05 September 2009 - 03:14 PM
QUOTE (YoungLadErin @ Sep 5 2009, 06:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No, I'm pretty sure we've got a couple more people doing it.
Good. I don't wanna be the only one awkwardly standing out there. . .
#9
Posted 05 September 2009 - 03:15 PM
Oh, don't worry, beth and I are making a collab one together. A shitty one. But one none the less.
#10
Posted 05 September 2009 - 05:22 PM
If you and beth are involved I highly doubt it will be shitty.
#11
Posted 05 September 2009 - 05:31 PM
Ummmm. Seeing as we were making up a random one with forced rhyme, it will be shitty.
We're just doing it for a laugh.
We're just doing it for a laugh.
#12
Posted 05 September 2009 - 06:32 PM
That was spooky.
You don't even know.
I'm tempted to do one of mine, but I sound retarded reciting my poetry....
>.<
You don't even know.
I'm tempted to do one of mine, but I sound retarded reciting my poetry....
>.<
#13
Posted 05 September 2009 - 06:40 PM
QUOTE (Miss Emily Smith @ Sep 5 2009, 09:32 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm tempted to do one of mine, but I sound retarded reciting my poetry....
>.<
>.<
DO IT.
YOU HAVE A CHANCE TO WIN YOUR NAME IN ORANGE.
#14
Posted 05 September 2009 - 06:49 PM
It's moments like these I wish I got my stage moments recorded... (I've done a live poetry slam. It was pretty damn exciting.)
#15
Posted 05 September 2009 - 06:52 PM
Dude. Record your voice or make a video. I COMMAND YOU.
#16
Posted 05 September 2009 - 07:01 PM
Lmfao.
Okay okay, but not today.
I'm sick, and I've lost my voice.
(well not entirely, but it makes for bad poetry reciting.)
Okay okay, but not today.
I'm sick, and I've lost my voice.
(well not entirely, but it makes for bad poetry reciting.)
#17
Posted 31 March 2010 - 03:18 AM
i think hearing you was better then reading it, cos you had the pauses for effect and etc..
#18
Posted 03 November 2010 - 08:29 PM
it was great. that happens to me all the time. damn writers block
#19
Posted 05 November 2010 - 06:41 PM
#20
Posted 05 November 2010 - 07:24 PM
QUOTE (XXDeadAngelXX @ Nov 5 2010, 09:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This body is empty
god new the soul would be sold so the body is hollow
But all the pain goes away when that blade goes across that body's wrist
And i say is
Ive died once
Ive died twice
Ive been dying all my life
But the pain feels so good
The pain keeps me sane while it drives the other in sane
But all i do is cause pain and take souls and die again and again on the inside
and keep using the blade that makes all the pain sadness and sorrow go away
when that sweet delicous red liquid comes out and i drink every last bit of it up
And say Yum!!
god new the soul would be sold so the body is hollow
But all the pain goes away when that blade goes across that body's wrist
And i say is
Ive died once
Ive died twice
Ive been dying all my life
But the pain feels so good
The pain keeps me sane while it drives the other in sane
But all i do is cause pain and take souls and die again and again on the inside
and keep using the blade that makes all the pain sadness and sorrow go away
when that sweet delicous red liquid comes out and i drink every last bit of it up
And say Yum!!
yourdoinitwrong
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