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When I Think Of You

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When I think of you
I think of loneliness first
My fingers clasp nothing
And my lips are depressed
But your words always linger
So as I think of you
My thoughts begin to dance
You make me smile so easily
With your intellectual waltz
And while I still miss you
I am successfully distracted
Then you get me thinking
There has to be a way
For me to be stronger
For you to unravel
We will see who wins
This game can go on
For as long as you wish
Because while I think of you
My mind is expanding
Who will fall first
You are right of course
Time is the only judge
Perhaps I am impatient
And I know this isnt a game
Because now as I think
Seriousness sets in
You are not playing
Otherwise I am decieved
you find me intriguing
I intend to keep it that way
I don't want to lose you
Please dont leave me yet
We have more to explore
And self control to test
Thinking of you
Is like riding a rollercoaster
That ride you've never ridden
who knows where it ends
Because I have yet to stop
I am still thinking of you
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....wow really nice poem 


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Nice poem.
But reads even better from the last line up. ;D
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....wow really nice poem 

Why thank you!!

 

Nice poem.
But reads even better from the last line up. ;D

Thank you! Lol, I just had to read it from the last line up!! It works, but you have to think about it. Lol


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your welcome :P


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I know, but you see what I mean about how much better it sounds backwards. It's a new thing I have, reading stuff from end to beginning xD 


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This is really good. Two thumbs up!


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Nice bs. lol


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This is pretty good


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