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the last unicorn

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This is the first proper poem that I have ever written because I'm more into creative writing so yeah. Also, I don't have a name for it so I'll need some help with that as well  :)

 

You were all I ever needed,

All I ever thought about,

All I ever cared about,

But you realised what a sh*t I am,

And suddenly I'm just another regret,

But, then again, what did I expect?

 

Does it even matter?

Do I even care?

I say I don't,

I can't be sad,

That's what everyone thinks,

And that's where everyone's wrong.

 

But I know I'm not the only actress here,

And probably not the best.

So, please, please, just stop,

Stop pretending that you care.

I want no more pain,

wrapped up under the Christmas tree,

Although I love you more than death

I can't hurt you anymore than I already have.

 

 

 

So, what do you think? (really just don't hold back)

 

 

 

 


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I like it. I can relate and think you got the idea onto the paper without a regretful tone or beating around the bush.


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