Its been a long time since I dipped back into poetry or any writing for that matter. So I started with this tiny poem its not even close to being done. Its just small, I usually extend it to at least two pages but this is the beginning of it and I wanted some opinions on it.
Devil’s eye shines like a diamond , shimmering, like a star on a cold night
However tempting it may be,
Stare straight into the light,
The devil hides the darkness inside and is not alone
Comrades and partners is all it sees,
there is only a shadow no friends in sight
So dark the abyss it consumes you whole,
If you don’t get out, you’ll find yourself all alone
For the Devil smiles, whispers sweet things but it is only a disguise
Hidden from the light all you receive are lies,
Take precaution in those you may find for the shadows loom closely behind,
At first everything seems all right but its unlucky to find yourself alone with a facade of designs.